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Don't touch me I'm Fragile
If you touch me I'll break
I don't know how much movement I can take
Because I'm Fragile
because I can break
my heart is at stake
So do not touch me I'm Fragile
If you touch me I'll break
my heart is fragile like ice on a lake
Just remember I'm fragile
remember I can break
Just thought you should remember
because my life is at stake
©2006-2009 ~Scribbley
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:iconsexytoaster:
Wow, this was beautifully written. The flow was very smooth and wonderful.

Great job!

:heart:

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Vampires.
Werewolves.
Which will you chose?!

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:iconscribbley:
Thank you first poem on here ever

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I am just another skull and crossbones
~Scri

I luff Jack Sparrow, savvy?
~Scri
:iconsexytoaster:
You're welcome.

:heart:

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Vampires.
Werewolves.
Which will you chose?!

[link]
:iconscribbley:
^^

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I am just another skull and crossbones
~Scri

I luff Jack Sparrow, savvy?
~Scri
:iconkeneran-akeno:
oooo i have to fave that....:hug: I like your word choice and repitition. It brings quiet a lot of meaning to the poem...just one question...how do you make the words do that...i've been trying to do it on one of my poems...*clears throat* I like the topic you used...i am faving this....:+fav:

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Keneran-Akeno

I want to be a prize and I want to be won!!

haha <div style="border:1px solid #5f677c; width:210px; min-height:54px; padding:4px; font: 11px verdana;"><a href="http://www.addictinggames.com/kittencannon.html?r=user_posted_link" style=
:iconspeakyourwords:
i like the repetition. it really adds to it

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huck finn.
:iconscribbley:
YAY you use < i > for italics then close it with < / i > then to under line you begin with < u > then end with < / u > then to bold its < b > then ends with < / b > and I added spaces so they will hopefully show up!

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I am just another skull and crossbones
~Scri

I luff Jack Sparrow, savvy?
~Scri
:iconscribbley:
Thanks I am going to redo some to tweak and make it better

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I am just another skull and crossbones
~Scri

I luff Jack Sparrow, savvy?
~Scri
:iconkeneran-akeno:
thanks!!!:hug: :giggle: i wanted to do something similar to a poem, but had no idea how to bold or italics or ANYTHING!! so thankies!!! :hug:

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Keneran-Akeno

I want to be a prize and I want to be won!!

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